Friday 17 April 2015

Building on negativity...


show how negativity breeds negativity breeds negativity....


Dance of Death

I dream of you.
I wake sad.
I need a drink.
It makes me sadder.
I sleep.
I dream of you.
I wake sad...
Repeat.

XXX

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8 comments:

  1. A vicious circles that destroys the soul... and the liver.

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    1. and the hearts of everyone around you X

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  2. a loud message in a short form, I think you nailed it!

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  3. Wow. A powerful short poem. Good job. Evocative of the cycle.

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  4. Oh! Simple, but perfect to convey the cyclical nature of it.

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  5. Oh! Simple, but perfect to convey the cyclical nature of it.

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  6. They cycle, the isolation, the self medication, it is all there! Good words, sad words!

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  7. Very very true! The cycle will continue, until your break it!

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