Day 17 of NaPoWriMo with Magaly
show how negativity breeds negativity breeds negativity....
Dance of Death
I dream of you.
I wake sad.
I need a drink.
It makes me sadder.
I sleep.
I dream of you.
I wake sad...
Repeat.
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A vicious circles that destroys the soul... and the liver.
ReplyDeleteand the hearts of everyone around you X
Deletea loud message in a short form, I think you nailed it!
ReplyDeleteWow. A powerful short poem. Good job. Evocative of the cycle.
ReplyDeleteOh! Simple, but perfect to convey the cyclical nature of it.
ReplyDeleteOh! Simple, but perfect to convey the cyclical nature of it.
ReplyDeleteThey cycle, the isolation, the self medication, it is all there! Good words, sad words!
ReplyDeleteVery very true! The cycle will continue, until your break it!
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